YES! I saw this jacket in the Lover of Life, Singer of Songs booklet and loved it! I like how you've balanced it out with Freddie's face - the jacket obviously pops, but it doesn't hog all the attention from Freddie himself (even though he's in black and white). Very nice.
thanks! this is the link to the drawing that has freddie's coat. it's not freddie wearing it though. [link] this is the video freddie wears it in in, hopefully you can see it ok. [link] and here's a still image of it [link]